by TallMarriedMan
HAWT! John and Mikayla are clearly in love with one another, one of them will have to be the first to break. She is probably already pregnant with his baby how much they screw haha
I know it's not an area you've really explored, and it may not be completely appropriate for this story at this stage, but what about throwing a little incest in to the mix? The daughter could join in the proceedings, or at least a simulation of her?
The writing style is a bit repetitive but overall the writing is very good. Initially the guy was a complete jerk for cheating on his wife but I am starting to feel sorry for him with his wife so unconnected to him. They guy does need more of a spine but the story line is still carrying this story forward. Thanks for this work.