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Click hereEdward remarried. His new wife was a rather dowdy, timid woman who also came from the small town up in. A friend told me that it was reported that Edward often invites other men to their small apartment for dinner. Perhaps his wife is very submissive. Or maybe her tastes fit comfortably with what Edward enjoys. They say say she seems very happy.
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Anonymousover 1 year agoThis is the worst racist crap I have ever read. For hundreds of years white people have used black men and women for their own selfish purposes. She treated Bradley as her servant. Worse than that. None of us would even treat a servant that shabbily. She was his teacher and her duty was to help him learn the lessons that would help him in his life. Instead, she used him for her own purposes and never treated him as a valuable human being. Did she once ask how this tawdry love affair would affect his future? Nope. She didn't care. Edward was a creep and deserved what he got. But she could have gotten what she wanted by just filing for divorce and asking for half of his business, to which she would have been entitled in most states, along with half of the rest of their marital property. She would have come out with more than the story states that she received. But the dumb aspects of the story pale into insignificance when compared to the underlying racist clap-trap.
Hiker66Bikerover 1 year agoThis yarn started well, with good writing quality and a believable plot, but then it slowly fell apart. The scene where the husband brought his client home to bonk his wife was so far fetched I nearly gave up reading. From then on this yarn went downhill rapidly with the author throwing in the usual BBC trope combined with a deterioration in writing quality. Much of the dialogue was wooden and the second half felt rushed. It could have been so much better. 3 stars, and thank you for sharing.
dragonmann72over 2 years agoWriter
You could have written a decent story about how the wife chose to use his own words in the divorce to come out ahead, yet you chose to trash your own work instead.
Everything I read in this story was me, me, me. They got married, he went to work and she continued her studies. She got a job as a professor and they bought a house where she wanted. She was popular and he wasn't. She tortured on the side (hiding the money) and complained that she had to live on her income. She wanted to hire house and lawn care people, eat out more, bring home prepared meals, to hire staff to help when we did choose to give a party, to travel more beyond the midwest.
Yes, he wanted something stupid, but what was one to expect when she cut him off? Everything to her was show.
When he asked her to do something for him (yes it was a dumb thing), she wigged out and kicked one of his clients out.
Then you trashed your story all the way by having her picking a black football player to fuck in front of him, then kick him out. The clincher was, 'Bradley, there must be other friends of yours who are big and strong like you. Maybe some of your friends would like to ask that I be their tutor so they can taste what you have enjoyed. If I asked would you introduce me to some of them? The more you fuck me the more I think I might like fucking other strong handsome men as well.' Now your heroin is just a big cock whore.
Impo_64over 2 years agoShe wanted the divorce because her husband wanted to share her, and then become a cheap whore fucking all men in town? Really? In what country was this? No children and she got the house and he still had to "pay the mortgage as he could and to provide $25,000 annually for expenses"? Really? This is so stupid it hurts...1* (Where are the VERY negative ratings when we need them?)
