All Comments on 'Shared by a Strange Couple'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wow - What a turn on

This is a fantastic story. The girl on the train part is so very hot, especially the teasing of the older guy. The bit with hubby is out of this world. I know exactly what you mean about three sets of lips. yummmmm

let us have some more please

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 1 year ago

Well, Eleven years has passed and still no "Papa Always Knows" posted on your account. I guess that it's safe to assume that you never wrote it. That's probably for the best.

This story wasn't too bad for a single page offering. But the public sex on the train wasn't very gratifying. It would have been better to have the two girls meet in a dining car, find a mutual attraction for each other, then one can invite the other to her private bedroom for the love making part.

A little bit disappointing, but not as bad as your other story. 3/5

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