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My wife and I enjoyed your story. However, your otherwise "good" story was marred by numerous spelling errors and typos. Just a few examples:

The word “Repritour” should be spelled “repertoire”. Your spell checker should have caught that.

You wrote, “Dustin followed my lead and fuck Denise while she blew me.” The word “fuck” should have been “fucked”.

If you can get some help on the editing you can go from "good" to "great". We look forward to the next chapter! My wife sends you kisses and wishes she had been Camille in your story!

I appreciated the very kind and useful feedback on improvement suggestions. This version has been revised. I am always trying to improve and will be more careful on future submissions.

Glad to receive comments from interested readers.

-AnonymousRobin

I truly enjoyed this story... best part was sharing in the same bed.. too many authors take the couples to separate rooms or even separate houses...that ruins everything... good job

Delicious fun.