All Comments on 'She Loves, White'

More an erotic encounter than a romance, but a VERY worthy first effort. Welcome. Looking forward to future works.

A delightful sexy story of rebirth!

I, for one, hope you grace us with more Connie stories.

This was good. Thank you.

Erotic coupling, not romance…unless there is a part 2

Sometimes you read a story and within the first few paragraphs, you know you're reading something unique and quality. That was how I felt reading this. I look forward to many more more stories to come. I cannot believe this is only your first.

V

A powerhouse of a story. Rebirth as a woman, as a sexual creature, as a human being. A reentry into the world she belongs in. A realization that she can be whatever she works to be. Nothing comes easy or without effort, but she'll realize that the effort is worth it. It was an erotic coupling rather than a romance, but a human being found that her almost-lost eroticism may well lead her to romance and I hope this author will allow us to join her on that path. 5*

i likedi it, and would enjoy meeting this woman

Wonderful, not just for a first but any post whether first or fiftieth. Keep up the grand effort.

Thank you for the lovely comments and feedback so far. I have submitted an edited version switching the story from Romance to Erotic Coupling, as suggested - sorry for the confusion, am very new to this!

Will be posting another story in the next week, and hopefully one per week thereafter so if you like my writing style, give me a follow!

S

I loved this portrait of a woman stuck on the careerist treadmill who realises that there is more to life than the view from behind a desk in a bland corporation where no-one cares about her and she's only as good as her last deliverable. The story had great character development, a great plot and it was very erotic. I look forward to your next chapter. 5 stars and thanks for sharing.