All Comments on 'Shona Pt. 06: Sharing Secrets'

Ooo. Such a build-up! I can’t wait for the catching up.

Sonia sure seems interesting.

Very nice piece of this series: Perfect title, fun/apropos phrases like orgasm break (always a necessity), afternoon delight (loved how you distinguish/characterize your erotic/sexual moments/times), beautiful introspection over slo-mo/languid sex (very sensual), closing dialogue/bit of tension among friends (very well done). And finally love the Aly-Shona relationship you’ve created and not just the sex; true, the sex is integral; the way you write the sex so revealing of that relationship — yes, intensely erotic but never a gratuitous afterthought/tack-on to the storyline.

Wait. Wait. I accidentally skipped the first page? With all the HOT sex? OK, I give you an extra five stars. Waking up from a dream of queening to the real thing? OMG.

toesucker1: 😄 Missed the first page! Ohh noooo!

Migbird: Thank you. I appreciate your analysis. Thought provoking.

This is building up into something spectacular. Halfway through the first page, I honestly thought Aly was Morpheus, come to take the soul of Shona! Then on page 2, it shifts onto Viv and you can feel the anxiety and sexual tension building ip inside of her. Looking forward to the next chapter...

CupidCupid: Thanks. I do try to keep you guessing... 😉