All Comments on 'Shona Pt. 07: Of Shoes and Shaving'

This is such a hot series. I’ve really been enjoying the interplay and evolution of the interpersonal relationships between the characters. You still manage to keep us guessing where things are going, though!

Outrageous debauchery that elevates endorphins and reveals. Nice. That and so many perfect phrases: “…fingers slowed to the merest cossetting caresses.” Seriously. And Shona’s feelings toward Aly: “… soaked up my adulation.” How she loved “…her enthusiasm for simple pleasures, her sheer gusto for so many things, including sex. It's infectious.” Yeah, you create intense sex around your characters but always the sex reveals. Enjoy your characters.

toesucker1: Thank you. Yes, sometines I even keep MYSELF guessing.... 😁

Migbird: Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I do find it enjoyable to create the characters and the interplay and hopefully that comes across in what I write.

The way you weave the erotic and hedonistic sex scenes with moments of pure sensual love, is simply, brilliant. I agree with toesucker1, in the way you keep your readers guessing, as to what is around the next corner!!

CupidCupid: Wow, thank you. That's high praise indeed. 😊