All Comments on 'Shy Wendy Ch. 02'

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KarotteKarotteover 2 years ago

It's a great start for a great story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Mysty99Mysty99over 2 years ago

Love the storyline! Nice mix of story development and erotica! Please keep it going!

RockyBoy67RockyBoy67over 2 years ago

More please!!! Very much enjoying this story and anxious to see what comes next. Very exotic and exciting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

But all 'story' and not enough actual sex.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

Still lacks needed details.

Mary's masturbation was detail-lacking. Needed much more in the way of describing how she began to masturbate, what she did next, what she did after that, what she was thinking about while masturbating. Did she use one hand or two? Did she insert finger/s? Was it all clitoral stimulation? Both?

Four stars.

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