All Comments on 'Simon Ch. 08'

Lost me

Interesting, but the final jump to the end felt too abrupt.

A good Story. Would havw liked a better ending. Especially one where Donna gets to know who really is the father. So that the karma would hit her.

The abrupt ending confused me. Was there a time jump to the future when Simon was an old man? Nothing in the story ends up being resolved?

This was a fantastic story that really could have been extended. The ending really deserves its own chapter.