Sink or Swim Ch. 03: Asphyxia

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Nat was still experiencing jolts of post orgasmic decadence as she gently enticed him back to reality with her feet, taking a shoe and covering his nose with it as he awoke. She knelt next to him, one hand delicately propping his head up as the other held the still warm inside of her sneaker to his nose. Dean didn't open his eyes, as she whispered lovingly to him, reminding him how perfectly obedient he is, was, and will be. Her soft words as he inhaled her intoxicating fragrance caused his dick to get erect again, pleading her in his mind to touch it, grab it. He would have ejaculated within seconds because of the deprivation and teasing over the past few days.

Nat saw his dick spasm but refrained from stimulating him, fighting the urge to watch her husband release. She wanted him to plead so she could remind him of what exactly her deal was all about. Nat thought of her boy toy Jake, thinking of how fun the next time they met would be, imagining him cumming on her face, her breasts, maybe inside her sneakers so she could always be reminded of his fierce orgasms every time she wore that pair. The kid had a very precise talent she learned, a tremendously powerful and long cumshot. He was so dreamy and so full of cum, exciting her, making her daydream. Nat wasn't taking any kind of birth control because she always made Dean wear a condom but the thought of making Jake wear one - IF she actually fucked him - she didn't want to be so cruel to her new young teen lover. Nat wasn't sure if she was ready to go that far yet, her date was so fun and she thought she would have the patience to wait for the perfect date, the perfect evening with him.

Nat leaned over and kissed Dean while wiping a tear of silent desperation from his eye, then stood up and walked to the shower. Dean, not wanting to break her rules, avoided masturbating - he waited for her as she washed, he fell asleep before she was done.

As Nat walked into the room, drying her naked body, Dean slept quietly in their bed. She reached for her phone and texted Jake.

Nat: Hey kiddo, want to go out next weekend?

Jake: Nat omg I love you

Nat: Love u 2

Jake: Yeah, next weekend is great!

Nat: Can you do something for me?

Jake: Sure yeah w/e u want

Nat: Tease yourself all week, but don't cum!

Jake: OMG that's almost impossible!

Nat: Promise me!! -hearts-

Jake: Ok, I promise

Nat: Okie, tty tomorrow -wink- love you!

Jake: love u, talk to u tomorrow!

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26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
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I didn't give you *1 star , but apparently a lot of people did. You really should put This in fetish. That's where you'll find your audience.

Osiris_HighTopsOsiris_HighTopsover 5 years agoAuthor
Common Fetish

And maybe you really do think it's a weird fetish, but honestly, just a slight bit of reading on the subject and you'd find out "Foot" or "Shoe" fetishes are one of the most common types in the world.

So maybe even YOUR fetish you don't acknowledge is actually the weird one. If you have one that is.

Osiris_HighTopsOsiris_HighTopsover 5 years agoAuthor
Guys, seriously...

Please refrain from voting 1 star just because it's a sneaker (or foot) fetish you don't agree with or like. That's just bad feedback and immature. You can still vote on the quality of the story properly even though that fetish may not be your thing. Driving down the rating just because you're not into that sort of thing is wrong IMO. I've red some pretty bad 1 star stories, I honestly don't believe this is one of them. Sure maybe it's not 5 stars, I'm not a professional writer, but honestly 1 star? I'm certain it's better than 1 star. It's just as well written as other stories of mine which have reached as high as 4.7 stars.

Yes there is fetish in this story, but it's mainly a cuckolding subject therefore "Loving Wives" ... even though Nat is very narcissistic and self-absorbed.

Remember this is a story, not RL... it's fun to read about and get turned on by such a dominant woman, but RL I'm sure none of us would last very long in this situation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Should be in Fetish, but still hot.

I got shoe fetish for my wife so I get it. Most guys dont understant that its common

some ppl will downvote because of this but its good you allow votes and comments just delete the real ignorant ones

I hope Nat fucks jake the next time

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
So to start, kudos for allowing scoring and comments. It appears you are a one trick pony with the odd shoe fetish for sneakers, and an obsession with submitting to a dumb, inconsiderate, and incompetent mistress. I totally get the occasional desire to p

But looking at it as fantasy for life with a wife is a bit off. I do think you deserve some props for trying to present the wife worship/ pussy worship genre to the audience.

Unfortunately this presentation will probably just alienate 99 percent of the non fetish readers. If the risk and indifference are what you need to make the scene arousing, more to you. But please understand most people won't, and many will find it sick and score accordingly.

Props for trying!!!, remember you don't have to be a loser or accept bad treatment to adore and serve a dominant woman. She doesn't have to be uncaring and u seeing , just a bit selfish and aware of her allure and power.

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