All Comments on 'Sins of a Sinner Ch. 03'

by MisfitToy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent

Wonderful story. Well written, very arousing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More please

This getting exciting. I love how you are building up the action. This is like the best possible foreplay (which can last days). Don't rush, please tease, but not too much, just enough ...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GREAT!

Great story. Welll told. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great

Great storys, getting better and better!! 5+

StoneyLodgeStoneyLodgeover 13 years ago
Great pacing

Your style of slow build-up really works. Other authors would have had her fucked by now. Your saving that treat for another chapter keeps the reader's interest and wanting to go on to the subsequent chapters to witness her subjugation.

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