by MisfitToy
Wonderful story. Well written, very arousing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks!
This getting exciting. I love how you are building up the action. This is like the best possible foreplay (which can last days). Don't rush, please tease, but not too much, just enough ...
G
Your style of slow build-up really works. Other authors would have had her fucked by now. Your saving that treat for another chapter keeps the reader's interest and wanting to go on to the subsequent chapters to witness her subjugation.