by tinytimireland
Like your other story I think this would have been better posted as a single story or perhaps in two parts. Crossdressing and incest will always attract and audience and as writers it is our duty to entertain them. Very good plot devices and descriptive text has potential. Keep up the good work. xxx Michele
I agree that the individual episodes are too short and would be better combined as one or two parts, although there is no obvious point at which to divide it. It would be interesting to hear how the humiliation of Jess deepens as public exposure continues.