All Comments on 'Sister/Genie Ch. 10'

She really needs to get over them, this has gone on for quite sometime . Her sister doesn't know it's her, but still the massive hang ups.

@TheSecretBunny

I grant it's been going on for a while; it was a personal choice. It always bothered me that in many incest stories the progression seems to be that two people who've grown up in modern society with all of the taboos and biological hang-ups around actual incest get over that hurdle in the space of about an hour and just start fucking. I was trying to guess at what the reaction might be if you have someone pining after another person without knowing if they return the feelings, on top of the fact that the relationship they want is full-on incestuous. I can promise you it doesn't continue in the same way for very much longer, but it will still be a central theme around most of the story going forward.

Finally!

Now we're finally getting some substance and meaning back into the story. I'm absolutely serious when I tell you you can delete Chapter's 7-9 and it would have virtually no impact on your story at all. This is the first decent chapter in ages.

You yourself lamented the drop in readership. I wasn't the only one bored to tears. Work harder and produce more chapters like this one and maybe some readers will come back. 4/5

Okay, the INCEST part of this story is getting closer, I think, ... and we get to briefly meet Trevor's kids (adults) before they all go to dinner and leave Jasmine with Jenny and Mariah (Jaya), and then there was sushi, wine and tears, oh my! ;-) TTFN

I'm enjoying the series but sometimes its confusing. Names keep getting changed for no reason and it muddles the plot