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junoKjunoKabout 1 year ago

I've really loved the story. This addition felt slightly weaker and ended on a good stopping note without something on the mind to really anticipate for the next chapter. Vidar's actions don't fully seem to flow from earlier, but I'm guessing he's being discovered along the way. But I would like the tense parts between them slowed down a tad bit more. It's really great writing and a neat story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I so wish this was a longer series, I love history and this was done beautifully and I adored it

Rainyday493Rainyday4933 months ago

Really enjoyed these stories, would be good to develop them.

InsectQueenInsectQueen3 months ago

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter; I’m rather attached to these characters. <3

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A veteran reader - first-time writer. Interested in mostly historical romance, with a non-consent theme, but have some modern stories coming out too. Stay tuned if you want multi-chapter stories with a focus on character and plot!

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