All Comments on 'Six Fuckers and a Lady'

Forget Theodore Dreiser, Upton Sinclair, and that crowd. Readers looking for a gritty, hyper-realistic, slice-of-life story need look no further than Erectus123. I'll have to remember the tip about anal vodka infusions. My sister has been using Taylor New York State Port, but that's really hard to get out of the sheets afterwards.

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Only two details of this story didn't ring entirely true. (1) "a Jewish girl who was a washout in bed." In the United States of America?? Rural Moldova, POSSIBLY. (2) Kaywoodie pipes are favored by (still) junior accountants who read too much Playboy magazine in their youth. I should think that, even in the Midwest, a professor would choose at least a Savinelli "Roma."

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One can argue about such details, but here's something no one can argue with. When it comes to stories like this, no one writes them quite like Erectus123 does!

Thanks, Sir Cleveland, if I were the king I'd knight you and gift you a large castle and free medical care and several ladies-in-waiting for your pleasure.

Real story of real people being dirty.

Smooth cool story, a fun read. This is a group I'd like to join once a week. -5'd

The backstory stuff was pointless, the description of the sex was non existent. Sorry, but it was ordinary.

Maybe keep the name consistent next time!

Elaine suddenly turning into Diane and then back again suggests you stole this story from someone else and couldn't be bothered to proof read it or correct the typos before posting it.

Anon who didn't like backstory - well you can't please everyone. I thought it made the characters more dimensional.

Annon who noticed error- yes, used a new word processing system that changed Elaine in Diane, it's now corrected and revised. This is an original story, not lifted. just an error. Thanks for your comment!!