All Comments on 'Slave to My Indian Maid Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hey, not bad! Pls update soon

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsover 2 years ago

Love the addition of the new young maid!

Akashahmed4444Akashahmed4444over 2 years ago

What a chapter. Really Liked the Inclusion of Zarine.Rubina is still my favourite though.Great comeback after a long time.Please continue the story man

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very erotic. Captures slave aspect very well

spankedboyspankedboyover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments. Update will come soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very very hot story. The susoense is too much to bear. Please post the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Finally an update:)

Indian auntie's bhi kardein please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please update us with the continuation of the story please

Alex271Alex271over 2 years ago

Great story, please never stop!

L O ReinsL O Reinsover 2 years ago

Good to see you back, Spankedboy. I’ve read all your stories but Slave To… is my favorite of your series.

This one is particularly good. A new great character-means a new beginning. Oh boy. And the structure of this chapter feels different. The cliff hanger is suspendió and clever because it introduces a flashback nicely. I’m not an editor or a grammar geek but I feel like your writing stepped up a notch. Very enjoyable.

spankedboyspankedboyover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments. Update coming soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please update....can't wait to read what lies next ahead

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice. Please do make Zarine far more gentle than Rubina. Like in front of Rashida, she punishes him hard, but privately makes up to him later at night. A love blossoming between Tarek and Zarine

spankedboyspankedboyover 2 years agoAuthor

Part 14 is now out.

spankedboyspankedboyover 2 years agoAuthor

@Anon ... Zarine and Rubina will be very different, but Rubina played a bigger role in narrator's life, of course.

spankedboyspankedboyover 2 years agoAuthor

@Alex271 thanks!

@L O Reins .. thank you so much for your comment. I don't know if my writing has become better... I am just writing my experiences, but thank you for letting me know!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Rashida mam part 15 upload date

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