by spankedboy
What a chapter. Really Liked the Inclusion of Zarine.Rubina is still my favourite though.Great comeback after a long time.Please continue the story man
Very very hot story. The susoense is too much to bear. Please post the next chapter soon.
Good to see you back, Spankedboy. I’ve read all your stories but Slave To… is my favorite of your series.
This one is particularly good. A new great character-means a new beginning. Oh boy. And the structure of this chapter feels different. The cliff hanger is suspendió and clever because it introduces a flashback nicely. I’m not an editor or a grammar geek but I feel like your writing stepped up a notch. Very enjoyable.
Nice. Please do make Zarine far more gentle than Rubina. Like in front of Rashida, she punishes him hard, but privately makes up to him later at night. A love blossoming between Tarek and Zarine
@Anon ... Zarine and Rubina will be very different, but Rubina played a bigger role in narrator's life, of course.
@Alex271 thanks!
@L O Reins .. thank you so much for your comment. I don't know if my writing has become better... I am just writing my experiences, but thank you for letting me know!