All Comments on 'Sleep Ch. 03'

Excellent ending. Keep up the good work on the next story.

I used to love this guy but, somewhere along the way, he took a very, Very dark tone - bringing violence and murder into his stories - really, more a Snuff story than anything. Of all the writers Krosis claims to emulate, None of them were this sick. After reading this, I am ready to throw up. You need psychological help, dude.

Well, I hope this referral will help...it was the story that you were probably wanting but when I read it, though it was well-written, it made me feel like throwing up. My story was kind of a rebuttal: https://www.literotica.com/s/natural-consequences

5***** Maybe Anita and Paul will find a better man with better manners to continue their arrangement, should you decide to write more on it...

Perfect