All Comments on 'Sloppy Seconds Airline'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This would have been better in sci-fi. It's simply a bridge too far.

DesertColtDesertColtover 1 year ago

Really hot idea, filling that slut up with all those loads, but the execution is poor. Grammar, spelling, and punctuation are so bad the story is ruined.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

good premise, poorly written

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I enjoyed it. I wish you were a little more detailed

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