by KSBerry
The couple in part 1 doesn't seem the same in this part!!!! From a loving couple they became a couple in a cold war!!! No explanation! And then she becomes a cheater!!! We don't know if the husband was cheating too!!! The only contact point in both stories was the lover: She only found black men and liked them to cum in her tits!!! The question: Why to stay in a cold war marriage? Why not divorce and then behave like a free woman? 1*
Total disconnect between the two stories and no explanation! At least we didn't have to put up with the huge black cock bullshit!!!
Give it time. This sort of story really improves with age, like raw meat left on the counter, in the sun, while your off on a month long vacation. Another year till chapter 3 is about right.
Sometimes a person really should not attempt a story with multiple chapters unless they can cohesively connect them. You seem to basically start over with just the slightest clue to the first chapter. Hopefully you learn from the criticism given.
Get a divorce ya fuckin whore. I'm sure your dildo Dontae will take your nasty ass in.