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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
superb

This is the first chapter in what is surely the author's finest story to date, and it is a superb romance story, the most neglected genre on the site. A little more extensive introduction to the characters would have helped with this first chapter, however, and the love scene- beautifully written- is rather too short. That said, this story still deserves a Five Star rating for the quality of the writing.

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I enjoy writing fantasy erotic/romantic stories that make the reader feel like they are a part of the story. I write first person sometimes wanting the reader to feel the story is about them as if they are telling the story.

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