by CustomFemdom
Good premise.
But not nearly enough touchy-feely.
Needed her slowly exposing herself to him. Would he like to see her tits? What would he like to do to/with them?
She could have asked was his cock hard? How hard? What made it so hard? Would he like to show her how hard his cock was?
And more like that.
Over much too fast.
Three stars.
What a great story! This is my favorite story, have read it a dozen times. Hoping for part 3 to come soon!