by Feverdreams
This was as erotic as a barrel of chopped up puppies.
I’m not sure if you know what marriage is or if you even know what love is; but maybe you should examine what it is before you write about it.
This some fucked up racial shit. I would have shot them all, including the wife.
Not into your sections dealing with his being whored out, just more turned on by the wife's not so subtle manipulation. Definitely a turn on for me. Regardless of what other people say if you're enjoying the process keep writing. It's definitely exciting to your targeted audience
Love this chapter! Agree with the last comment. Not a fun with the whoring out sections hotter when its just the people within the household
Good chapter, but some of the dialogue seems almost out of place after the events of chapter 16. Eagerly awaiting more of this series, hope you write more soon.
Loving this story, so much that I check daily for the next installment. I cannot wait to see the next chapter and hope it continues to follow the same path as well as turning the wife into a BBC whore too.
Please keep this going.
a new chapter is cumming. i apologize for the long wait. it takes a bit to catch a fever when it breaks....