All Comments on 'Son of a Witch Pt. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing Update!

This story just keeps getting better and better! Barley and Elliot are so sweet together. I can't wait to see what happens to Jay next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Love your story. Can't wait for part 10.

Continuity sidenote: you established Barley's size in part 5, which is a bit higher than it is here.

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Into magic, sph, humiliation and gay themed works. Always open to constructive criticism or ideas for where you'd like a story to go

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