by Alice_Nicol
This Thai adventure is wildly erotic; brings back erotically positive memories created in much earlier moments in Sophie’s awakening (before husband’s patronizing lecture and Sophie’s humiliation). The sex scenes here are tantalizing and quite intense, notably the closing scene with Kamlai, and would be even more so if you shortened some of the long descriptions — yes, graphic but reduces tension/tumescence. When you include more dialogue, and not necessarily screaming “Fuck me, Fuck me, funk me”, the erotic tension escalates. Liked this piece.