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"Champagne," Poppy answered the unasked question,
"A gift from Tiphany." She added.
When all four glasses were full Lexi raised hers & the other girls followed her example, the clinking of glasses was followed by laughter before Harmony said,
"To friends & Sisters!".
The others echoed her & clinked glasses again before smiling broadly & finally tasting the very good & very expensive Champagne.
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The End, well sort of! This is the end of Sorority Pledge, but there will be a probably three part follow up about Harmony's time in the sorority.
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As always I love all your comments and suggestions, I'd particularly like to hear from other girls with comments, suggestions, requests and idea's for this or other stories.
Love and licks, Lucy X X X X X X X
- COMMENTS
Spoiltgoddessfanabout 2 years agoSo, I read the whole thing. Firstly, congrats on an imaginative story. You have some really creative and memorable scenes in this story that will stick with me for a long time. I felt you lost your way when you introduced all those new girls. They became too friendly and nice with each other and the story 100% lost the cruel edge that made the first 3 chapters so appealing. The points pledge challenges lasted too long and became repetitive after a while. I'll be honest, I ended up skipping most of this last chapter just to try and find the scenes involving Rebecca.
I feel as if you maybe got overly influenced by some of the feedback from people that felt bad for Harmony and wanted her to get revenge. I liked your original concept much better. The original girls that were so mean to Harmony completely changed their characters until they were basically unrecognizable from their originals. Britney, Tiphany, Amy, and Ashley were all horrible to Harmony but once we hit chapter 4 it is as if all if forgiven and forgotten.
I had no interest in seeing Cindy destroyed in that way. I liked the story when it was the rich mean girls humiliating and degrading the poor girls. Unfortunately, that concept ended too soon. I loved what you did with Rebecca, but then we had no pay off. Is Harmony going to end up her slave? We only had one scene involving Rebecca and Harmony in this whole chapter. We needed more. Michelle completely disappeared from the plot and are we to believe that someone as malicious and sadistic as Cindy is going to just surrender her revenge after something so extreme? The board never came into play and everybody just sort of decided they liked Harmony without any real reason as to why they became nice.
I will very likely reread the first 3 chapters again as those were the hottest but I would probably not reread anything beyond that.
I don't know if you are checking literotica now since you haven't posted a story in 4 years. I hope you do come back and write again as your mind is delightful and evil. Please do not change the story you want to write in the future. You are at your absolute best when writing about bullying and cruelty.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoHarmony now free from being told what to do. Is now finding that she can tell others what she likes and becomes less submissive! She does after all have a whole sorority of sisters now to choose from!
SE1995over 5 years agoWe need more! Once you start reading you can't stop. Would love to see a continuation of this, especially white Rebecca and Harmony. I do believe she will still be submissive to her regardless of her position now.
