All Comments on 'Southern Discomfort Ch. 01'

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Nice build up for part 2

Hope you add some humiliating sex

Thanks for the story

Uhm... wat... lol

Great, as always. I need to know what kind of casserole it was though...

Great, as always. I need to know what kind of casserole it was though...

Story was brilliant Amy, well written and was intriguing to see who got the upper hand. Finished just when it got really good, looking forward to part 2

Dolly2 - Thank you so much! Don't worry, there will be more humiliation in the future!

Two21B - Thank you for the comment! And the type of casserole doesn't matter lol!

Okay, I find the dialogue is very on the nose. "Oh, I am so humiliated right now!" You need the dialogue to feel more organic. Other than that, the action needs more beats, like pacing needs to pick up a bit. I REALLY like the catfighting, though. I gave you a four, and I know you can get me to a five for the next chapter.

Great job Amy once again on another beautiful cat fight story. I never get enough of these

I have to say, I was kind of rooting for the blonde, so I'm happy the way the story ended.

I was fully expecting a new neighborhood queen to be crowned. I do love the ending. Well done.

Goliadmike - Thank you so much. But don't worry! There will be plenty of more chapters to come

As usual I am not disappointed with this chapter. I was looking for some dominance but was surprised who holds that power "as of now" No telling who will win in the end maybe the other wives will be the victors. time will tell. great job.