All Comments on 'Spies Ch. 04: Choices'

by Hypnojim

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story. Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

There are some minor grammatical errors, some missing quotation marks, but your writing is so exciting they don't really get in the way. Still, something to work on. Please keep writing.

DelendorDelendoralmost 2 years ago

The stories never get boring and I hope we will see many more sequels!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userHypnojim@Hypnojim
I write mind control bimbofication tales. Thanks for reading!

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES