All Comments on 'Good Bimbo Employee'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not very good. Has some potential but needs a lot of work to flesh out the story.

No6_ThePrisonerNo6_ThePrisonerover 2 years ago

Thank you for the effort as writing is not easy. Personally the story didn’t bring anything new to the genre and was too quick

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You're doing great. Keep on keeping on and don't worry about the naysayers.

They can move on to whatever trips their trigger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story apart from the ending as I don't like sex change stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i love the concept, needs some actual sex tho

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Needs a part two

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story.

Parts 1 & 2 seem to be in the wrong order.

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