All Comments on 'Still Figuring It Out Ch. 03'

With a set up like this I hope the next chapter is not a month away.

Great idea and good start, you can make the chapters longer. A little more character development needed, and you can draw out the story to 2 to 3 pages. Great start, keep up the good work

Im liking the story better with each chapter. I only wish that you would at least put out a 2 page chapter from now on. ty /bill