All Comments on 'Straight Boy Makes Money Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't wait for the next installment. It is fun watching him struggle becoming a slut for cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Getting HOTTER and HOTTER! So, will we finally find out who MrGTop is, or will he be concealing himself somehow. Now that he has so much power over Harvey, there doesn't seem to be a reason why he can't reveal who he is. #4 was another ***** chapter, can't wait for #5. MLF

liz33ndliz33ndover 1 year ago

this is hot, good job with this chapter. solid four stars

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 1 year ago

FANTASTIC CHAPTER !!! This chapter really turns me on so much more than the other chapters. The detailed description of slut Harvey and his older gay friend undressing each other is exactly what I have done many many times with my male lovers. Getting naked, holding hands while walking into the bedroom, and then having hot passionate gay sex. Unlike Harvey, I suck the real thing and get fucked by a real cock -- AND I LOVE IT !!!!

Harvey, despite your protestations to the contrary -- you are becoming gay and you need to accept it willingly, the way I did a few years ago. Sucking cock and getting fucked is wonderful. You will enjoy it once you give in to your sexual needs.

Please please please post the next chapters soon. I can't wait to find out who MrGTop is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

His girlfriend’s name is Daisy not Steph!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The collab with Jimmy was hot because it was consensual and Jimmy was very nice and respectful toward what Harvey requested. mrGTop, on the other hand, is an asshole and I don’t like him at all. Also, the girlfriends name is wrong throughout this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is there any chance he will break up with his girlfriend the whole cheating thing is really taking away from the story for me maybe I’m alone there but the next one will be the last for me

Deimos666Deimos666over 1 year ago

I legit thought he had been fucked in the ass by a real cock in the end while he watched the video would have been revealed as a twist, altho him being respectfull and consensual was also hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think MrGTop is his Gf's friend, George. Something tells me that Harvey and his GF are both gonna be taking turns bobbing on his cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

*So* looking forward to the next instalment! A great story.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I love this. I can’t wait for him to take a real cock.

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