by MosheDovit
This is definitely a 10! You paint very vivid pictures Moshe. Looking forward to the next story. Mmmm!!
Still a good premise.
Still nothing but hands jerking cocks.
Needs dialog during the action. Needs men being forced to describe how they feel. How they're enjoying their milking. Needs extended teasing without cumming. Needs involvement of other body parts: boobs, ass, legs. Maybe some rimming of the ladies while their cocks are being played with.
And, BTW, Dom is a man. Domme is a woman.
Four stars.