All Comments on 'Straighten Up Slut Ch. 02'

by MosheDovit

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This is definitely a 10! You paint very vivid pictures Moshe. Looking forward to the next story. Mmmm!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Submale4you

Wow I wish I were one of those guys.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story

Great story, wish my wife could meet Ella and Mary

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

Still nothing but hands jerking cocks.

Needs dialog during the action. Needs men being forced to describe how they feel. How they're enjoying their milking. Needs extended teasing without cumming. Needs involvement of other body parts: boobs, ass, legs. Maybe some rimming of the ladies while their cocks are being played with.

And, BTW, Dom is a man. Domme is a woman.

Four stars.

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