All Comments on 'Strangers on a Train'

by ArabethMora

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 2 years ago

Very good story. I didn't expect that ending, but enjoyed it thoroughly.

UnconsciousEmissaryUnconsciousEmissaryabout 2 years ago

Clever and sexy. Thank you.

cioprocioproabout 2 years ago

Great well written story - unexpected ending made it even hotter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Brilliant ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WAS SLOOOOOOOW AND NEVER GOT GOING ........ THIS WOMAN IS SO STUPID,SHE WANTS TO TELL HER HUSBAND EVEN THOUGH SHE DID NO WRONG !

lawoftheheartlawoftheheartabout 2 years ago

everything good but the ending.........trite, the idea that the stranger was her husband...come on...

Geezer83Geezer83about 2 years ago

1. Great job with a slow descriptive narrative.

2. Loved her arousal detail

3. There is no satisfactory ending

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I love to write erotica rather than graphic details. The situation is everything to me and as a wise man once told me, there are only so many ways of inserting tab A into slot B If you're looking for a money shot, its probably better that you read something else