by Apophenia
Non-consent is not my thing, but I did like the horny little sis... Happy Thanksgiving to all !!
This story made me uncomfortable. Yes, incest can be hot, but the fact that the brother essentially forced himself on his sister, who was not agreeable to them fucking, means that this was not a romantic tale, but a description of a rape. And that doesn't make me comfortable with this story.
The fact that she kept telling him to stop after penetration was just a step too far.
Incest stories can be fun, but this went too far.
You should have let her start to enjoy it, start to want it, and then penetration. Incest stories should be about love for eachother. Erotica, and especially incest stories, should never have any sexual abuse
I don't think rape is ever fun or erotic. I hope the sister gets revenge on Bruce or Drew or whatever you want to call him.
This is literally the noncon/reluctant section of this site. The author has over two dozen stories in that category. Why are you even here if you don't have that particular kink?
No kink shaming here, you like what you like. But is he Bruce? Or is he Drew? Proofreading is a wonderful thing. I really enjoy your writing style. Your “closet” series was yummy! Don’t stop writing.
I’m sorry to bring negativity in the comments but I can’t believe the audacity of some folks.
To the people complaining under me… this is a FANTASY story the autor published (for free I must remind you) in the freaking NON-CON category. If you don’t like it,
1. (and I can’t belive I even have to say this) don’t read something in the noncon section. That simple. If you can’t differentiate fantasy from real life and you STILL read in the noncon section??? That says a lot about you. Quite disturbing actually.
Or 2. Go write your own story the way you want it. Nobody owes you shit. Especially for free.
Imagine browsing the noncon category and complaining about noncon. Story was good. Thanks for the upload
omfg, for the people complaining this is uncomfortable, YOU ARE LITERALLY IN THE NON-CON SECTION. It is MEANT to be rape- the author even put a whole ass disclaimer at the start and you bitches be whinging about this. Go to some other section then.
I think some people read the Non-Con/Reluctance stories hoping for the reluctance ones and hating the non-con. I do wonder if they should be separate really as it comes up in the comments often. But then maybe they just can’t read categories.
Personally I am not into the Taboo/incest category but thankfully can just go “la la la.. they’re not related” in my own mind as I am reading it. Would be handy to be able to have multiple categories but I guess that is where tags come in.
Aaaaanyways, amusing story, sorry your comment section is being hijacked by this.
Excellent brat character, love the unreliable narrator angle about her brother being annoying. Very hot story, five stars.
This story was super excellent! Hit my creampie/breeding kink super hard, she eventually found herself unable to do anything but enjoy the cock and cum and uh....
I also pretend they are step siblings. Cause incest baby is a boner deflater ;l otherwise 5 stars hands down
*comes into noncon*
thats rape!
.....what do they think noncon means???
anyway this was hot as fuck. i hope there are more chapters for not only the night but the following ones
5 stars for this incredibly hot noncon incest, appropriately classified and tagged as it is. I liked the idea that he's been douchey but looking out for her in his own way. I actually wouldn't have minded reading more about these two, but I do like that your stories end before they get a chance to be boring or overdone. Definitely one of my favourite authors on here. Sorry that your comments get eaten up by people who clearly have limited cognitive function.
I must have missed the 'probable rape' category - or did you change the category of this RAPE story? -5*
You write surrender so very well. I would've loved some sort of ending or explanation where the two came to realize their attitudes were both mistaken.
I thought it was great,good story line ,now write a story, where he fucks his mother and gets his mother pregnant, where the daughter tells her mother,mom you should fuck your big cock son, oh God his big cock felt so good,mom you got to convince him fuck you,then again you add 3 parts to this story. Good writer, are there more story's like this please reply back or tell me,what other story you have( studman37)
Is there a part 2 where the daughter tells her( mom) she should fuck her big cock, (Son)?where the (Mom let's the big cock (Son) fucks his mother and she also gets knocked up!Oh god,yes come inside me(son) cum inside your mother's fertile pushy, I love your big cock!
Maybe you can write a story about about ( lawn boy fucks mature married women in shower( black lawn boy), w/ 11" black cock!
I think that it was a great story. I especially liked it when she told her brother that she wasn't on anything. That didn't stop him from coming inside of her and If anything he didn't seem to care if he knocked her up.
I hope that you can give us a update on what happened. I'm hoping that they continue to fuck, until she gets pregnant
This is such a delicious combination of kinks for me! I love your work. Incest, plus non/dubcon, plus forbidden creampie just leaves me in a big puddle. Thank you!
you found the right mix of parts for this type of story, neither too worry nor too weak, without the overkill, either. Moving on to pt2 now.