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Click hereLily grimaced and wriggled away from her perch on his lap.
"It's not fair! She passed out, how could I give her more orgasms like that? It's not my fault that this slut cums extra hard from anal!" Lily protested. The words made Chelsea blush.
"That has nothing to do with it. You said you could do it. You didn't. The rules were very clear. Now, you're getting punished." Jeremiah responded calmly. "Your slave only came 4 times tonight, so it looks like you're getting 8 punishments."
Lily stared icily at Jeremiah. Chelsea didn't want to see them in conflict, but she wasn't sure she wanted to see her Mistress punished either. Finally, after considering Jeremiah's final words silently for a moment that seemed to stretch on uncomfortably for minutes, Lily regained her composure, smiled eagerly at Jeremiah and knelt next to Chelsea submissively.
"Do your worst," Lily said, playfully. Jeremiah rose from the couch and looked down at Chelsea.
"Go get some food from the kitchen, pet. We have to teach your mistress a lesson she won't forget, and you're going to need your strength," Jeremiah commanded.
- COMMENTS
Usemeforyouover 1 year agoAbsolutely love this story, have read it several times. Hope you are doing okay, it would be great if you came back and continued it.
Submisky35over 4 years agoThoroughly enjoying this well written story. Looking forward to Chapter 3. Keep up the good and interesting writing.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI really enjoy BDSM stories but this one had things that were too much for me. Water sports just aren’t anything I’m interested in which in itself wasn’t an issue, I can skip past that unless it’s a regular feature. They were using the wrong kind of mindfuckery.
The problem was the repeated punishment for orgasming without permission, any kind of agreement should only cover from the signing point until revision or dissolution, but they punished her repeatedly for orgasming on their second scene. It should have been once only. The punishment should be clearly defined with a once and done approach.
Random punishments etc are irrelevant because they can happen on a whim. If a sub is being punished multiple times for one incident then it’s a bad precedent leading to loss of trust. The only thing the sub knows to expect is that there won’t be a cessation of punishment, no forgiveness or acceptance. What they’re doing in your story might be erotic but the psychology of it is fucked up.
Add on punishment at work and you’re risking her career. It’s a known thing that people in stressful powerful positions may feel the urge to submit to unwind but you really don’t fuck with their job or family. I skipped out after reading about her spanking at work, plain stupid.
Best of luck with your writing, I’m out.
Tess (UK)
Anonymousover 4 years agoI absolutely love this story. I can't wait to read more, Please continue it.
