All Comments on 'Sucking Jorge Pt. 01'

I have several questions. How did the wife get the upper hand If the narrator did nothing wrong? Why there occurred another guy to introduce Jorge? Did Jorge feel disgust or interested initially?

“When I could hold my breath no more,…” is such an important moment and this is great storytelling

Jorge was working all day and had an uncut cock. I would have liked more description of crotch facing you, his hairy masculinity and the musky scent of the balls and dick you were kneeling in front of. Good story but more description of the object of your desire using all of your senses would have made the story easier for the reader to imagine being in your position. I love the idea of giving a workman like Jorge a blowjob after a days hot sweaty work! Keep writing, love a good cock sucking story! Maybe Jorge and his friend return and you get to suck them both off!