All Comments on 'Summer by the Sea Pt. 01'

Nice coming of age story. Keep writing

What a fabulous fantasy!

Great story and what a lucky guy - I wish I could be naked with 3 gorgeous girls.

I enjoyed this story a lot. I definitely agree with the previous comments. Adam is one lucky young man to

experience what he did. However, the story is not to be taken very seriously as none of the characters seem to be at all concerned about their promiscuity or the consequences of their actions. The only thing realistic is that Jennie insisted that Adam use a condom. The character development is weak. Are these real people? Having said that, I got very turned on reading the story. Being a long-time exhibitionist who has been to clothing optional beaches, I can relate to the young man's thrill at showing his erection to the young ladies. But this story goes beyond mere exhibitionism as Adam gets to sow his oats with these lovely girls who are eager to explore their sexuality with him. Obviously, he has been blessed.

@exhibitionistguy

Thank you for taking the time to give some detailed feedback.

Not sure that it is all fair, but I will certainly think about it.

Don't take the critic to heart. They actually do not need to be concerned about consequences as long as they are being careful. Just having a fun summer, I'm sure they will look back with fond memories. I know I do.