All Comments on 'Summer Hummer'

Can't beat a good Loving Wives story amidst the usual garbage.

Another winner!

5

Like maybe some plot developments, and infidelity. Loved your story "Gifted", though.

Well dne! Thanks for writing!

First, this is Romance or Erotic Coupling. Maybe even better as How To ( cure shyness in a spouse.)

Swallowing the First Time may be ‘adventurous’ for Sweetie, but no more so than EACH sex act every one of We-The-Readers has initially experienced. That is not sufficient as an LW criterion.

Second, I would suggest, if recast as a ‘How To’ posting, that including encouragement to Sweetie for ever escalation of her boldness will improve both of their lives. Moaning, to groaning, to grunting, to mild verbal “so good” , to “Harder, Faster“, to screaming. A steady diet of loving and cuddling seems to be Hubby’s main technique ... OK as far as this account goes. But, like a steady diet of wild monkey fucking & sucking, a gap is introduced, and SOMEone is out there ready to fill any gap in your marriage (pun fully intended.)

The last sentence in this offering took it from 3* to:

4*. and eating a cup of pineapple chunks the night before will bring Capistrano benefits.

Ugnore anon and enjoy the good comments about a good ole fashioned love story

Hey until I write a better one, You rule.

I completely expected that to take the usual LW turn but it didnt. Well done!!

Great story hope more to follow on their sweet love.

The guy earlier complained that nothing happened and you had no character development. A. A killer blowjob happened. I don't know about you but I wouldn't call that nothing. And B. The majority of the story was dedicated to developing Donna's character. I personally think that guy was just like most of the trolls in this section who just spouts off to hear his own voice without knowing what the hell he stalking about.

A bit wordy leading up to the non-plot, but so much better than her responding his cum didn't taste near as bad as a lot of other guys.

Thanks for the effort.

Nicely crafted lead up to the pun(ch) line. Made me smile for quite a while.

Interesting story and a well-written story but I wonder if it should have been in Romance instead. I wonder why is it called a blow job? To my understanding, one has to suck and not blow. I have to admit I've always been a prissy bitch and never given one it always pissed my ex off. Many thanks though for a story that doesn't have Cucks, Psychotic bitches/bastards trying to kill or cause as much damage as possible 5 Stars

Nice little story!

Very nice. A bit short which means I wanted to read more. Never heard that swallow joke before!

This would have been an ok story, short, with no-plot and no character development, but cute... if it had been posted in a category for happy monogamy. Unfortunately, since you posted it in a category for stories about extra-marital fun, and there wasn't any, it loses 2 stars. 3* - 2* = 1*.

Interesting story concept, but there just isn’t enough story. It’s just a blowjob.

All a setup for a great gag line (no pun intended). Thanks for the five star laugh.

That was sooooo bad. Not very punny at all.

Good story about a.Loving Wife. They don't all have to be cheating whores.

Good story made great with the old saying. Thank you!

excellent

Title sounds like it should have been a Beach Boys song.

All about the punchline. More of a joke than a story - but witty and worth a read.

LA

Little too short for me - 4*

A thousand words to set up a single pun. I respect it.

An old saw turned into a short, sweet story. Very good indeed! 5 stars.