All Comments on 'Summer Surprise Pt. 16'

Great story as usual, I always enjoy them.

You changed character name -- the next morning after graduation when Chloe's parents Ben and Mary Jane return you switched to Dan (Scott Rivers dads name) when talking with Diane and the rest about D/s

I much prefer this story to the cuck story.

I absolutely LOVE when you have a needy slave wearing a Slave Trainer until they accomplish a certain task. Gotta be the best teaching aid ever.

Fabulous story! Except…you had Brianna, Chloe and Monique going to bed together. I was euphoric! Then you moved on to other characters. Devastated not to get the play by play- utterly devastated!

I hope Elaine finds love before the story ends. She always seems to have some sadness about her. It’s understandable but I surely would love to see her truly happy with someone who fully accepts, appreciates and loves her fully. She deserves it

Jesus this is weird....great story but weird....hits about a 9.5 on the weird shit-o-meter. Please write about Elaine more.

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Cheers