All Comments on 'Summertime Sunshine'

by SherryDarling

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now9 months ago

Quite hot!

Loved this theme - fine treatment of it.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very hot, original, and well-told. Thanks.

Ed

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I really like this story, a slow, sensual build up and the way the men treated Anna so thoughtfully and tenderly is refreshing. A lot of what I read on here is much more assertive and dominant, so it's good to have a counterbalance. Great writing, thank you for such an entertaining story :)

DothattomeonemoretimeDothattomeonemoretime9 months ago

Excellent! Well composed and written. 5 stars👍

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I agree that most of the stories here are dominant, so to find this is fresh. It’s a nice paced story that leaves us wanting more. It was written really well and I look forward to part 2.

GeneralUrsusGeneralUrsus9 months ago

Wow! That was hot as hell! Very well written! Bravo! 5 Stars!!!

RunSilentRunDeepRunSilentRunDeep9 months ago

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

virusmanvirusman8 months ago

A lovely story about the beginning of a threesome relationship and most beautiful and loving double penetration.

lexlogan8lexlogan88 months ago

Best MFM story I've read here.

wwaldripwwaldrip7 months ago

Best story I have ever read and would like to read more.

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I have been reading erotica for years and began writing it a few years ago. I am now ready to share it here and hope you all enjoy! Sorry I don't play sex online.