All Comments on 'Sun, Sand and Skin: Day 02'

An exciting ride in the making

So far the going is very good. The plot, characterization, the flow, the buildup and the writing. The follow up possibilities are quite exciting but 2nd part doesn't show up more story.

However bit disappointed with Adam character is introduced.

Love to have story only focused on heat ignites in two couples towards each other spouse : Emma with Ryan and Dan with Ali rather than including fifth character.

Hope Adam will be gone in next part.

Thanks for your comment! I'm afraid Adam will be staying around but hopefully in a way that subverts some expectations and keeps a strong focus on the two couples. Plus he will be entirely offstage on day 4! And that is the build up all done now; lots of sex in the next chapter - although it will be a while before that is published.

Ten stars from me

Great descriptive writing and I truly loved the seduction.

loved the descriptions of Emma body how it moved and so real.

chapter two could be more amazing but did great job.

Thankfully Adam is just to watch or subverts.

Hoping & can't wait when Ryan will be first one to feel and suck Emma's Rack cherished with pink nipple after Dan,Probably get desperate after he sees her topless.

Holding horses for next chapter.

I hope to read it soon. I almost got off reading this series, thank you

Feedback : lovingly expect to share further part of this series ASAP as gaps killing interest to read further.

I love the story. I like the characters, but hope the story dips it's toe in the sph water more. Was really hoping Dan had to walk back out with drinks after that embarrassment with Ali. Well written I'm hooked and can't wait for more.

Coolboiyz - ten stars is pretty good. Thank you! But I'm afraid you'll have to get used to big gaps between chapters. Part two actually came out superhumanly fast for me. It is a seven part story and I am really unlikely to finish it this year. I'll wrap it all into a single book once it is done though.

Anon - There will be more SPH but I'm going to try and ride a bit of a rollercoaster: Dan gets built up, Dan gets knocked down, Dan gets built up again. But Dan is definitely going to be naked and on show on day three.

Thank you for your response!!

Highly Appreciate your work!

You trying to put chapter at accelerated rate, Many thanku!!

5/5

This is a MasterClass at Erotica and I mean it. This is exactly that one story I would suggest as a reference for everybody who wants to write their own story.

The plot, the characters, the setting, everything is just perfect.

I hope you can make the next as interesting

A must read this is. An setting has been made to look so so real. The entire series is just perfect.

The author deserves to be appreciated.

please please continue all your pending works. the sequels you write are in a completely different league. really appreciate the effort taken. and looking forward to more

Very nice and horny

Continue with more episodes

Filled with major moments of brilliance, there were at couple of instances where i felt some serious rush of blood, excitement

these are just my views, i am eagerly looking forward to the next part

I was just getting so aroused because of your word craft and their relationship with so much promise of loving fucking and you just pull the rug out from under me! Please bring us next chapter soon.

Damn how much ginger it will take

Day Three is still in the queue. I have a new story - The Warded Shaft - to finish. I'm at 4,000 words so not too much more needed. Then chapter two of Jizzabelle. Then back to SSS. I'm grateful for the interest in the story but I'm not able to go any faster.

Sounds a good but long plan.

Just only want to share option like finish one series then move to another.

It's been a long day without you, my friend

I would tell him everything when I saw him, but I don't think that will happen

Volve amigos porfa, me quiero masturbar y aprender Inglés al mismo tiempo

Damn this series is too good!

Where is the next update plZ