All Comments on 'Suncream Angel Pt. 03'

There was the seed of something in this series, but the quality of the writing is so haphazard that the seed keeps squirting away.

Get an editor!

An other good series of fantasy for boys. No need to continue. Please edit and check grammar and flow. One question; was she naked when all the boys were watching her and doing their thing? If so, say that, it increases the erotism. Add a dildo, have her use that as the imaginary dick to play with.