All Comments on 'Surprise Pt. 01'

A nice erotic story. I really hope he doesn't have a guy fuck her. The nipple play and shower were erotic but once he starts the wife share I get turned off.

Great story, hopefully their is a follow up that will finish her pampering.

Part two will be Cumming soon. But no spoilers here.

I'd really like to see you use an editor. The story is great but the spelling errors really detract from the quality of a smooth read! Can't wait until the 2nd pt.

My apologies for the spelling errors. The original was composed on an Apple device and converted to a Windows machine. I have no idea what happened prior to submission but I have made corrections and hopes it makes it an easier read. Part 2 has also been submitted.