All Comments on 'Sweet Summer Night Ch. 04'

I wasn’t sure of some of the mechanics of this, as in how and where he was spanking her - it just wasn’t very clear (at least not to me). Still it wasn’t a major distraction and I definitely enjoyed your story, after reading 4 chapters in one go.

Thank you again for sharing your story.

Tess (UK)

Oh, darn! Sorry that wasn't clear! To be fair, some of the stuff I've written has some kernel of actual experience behind it. This one unfortunately doesn't. But the idea was that they were in a sort of standing doggy position where her upper body was lying face down on the front of the car with her hands tied behind her back. He was basically slapping her butt cheeks one at the time. For the record, these weren't supposed to be very hard slaps, just enough to make a nice *Smack* sound (except the one he went a bit overboard). Pain isn't very much my thing! I'd post a link to an image but I don't think I'm allowed to :S