All Comments on 'Swelling Need'

Susie sounds like a lucky girl! :D good job on this one…

As a near hopeless romantic I love what you’ve created around Moriah and Suzie — the richly developed believable characters, the simmering/evolving relationship and the sex scenes never gratuitous sidebars rather so nuanced/revealing of personalities and elements of their relationship. Yep, I got caught up; have reread and will continue to do so — you create easy/revealing dialogue; sometimes so funny/sassy, other times poignant, always a nice fit with the moment/scene. Maybe the end of this romance — the closing scene in this piece is beautiful/beautifully crafted. If so, hope you continue to share your imagination and creativity.

@ComingUpSmellingLikeRoses

;) naw…Moriah‘s the lucky one darling…tx

I loved the Wizard of Oz scene at the beginning. And the segue into hot sex.

I have just started reading your stories. I love how you have back tracked with Suzie and Moriah. So many others do the usual slow burn where things have to build up from the start. They are so rigid and "scripted".

As to Moriah and Suzie, they are hot, sexy and real. Enjoying it immensely.