by mountian299
Really enjoying the story and looking forward to the next chapters.
I'm more than willing to forgive punctuation and grammatical errors for the sake of a good plot-line.
I'm just a little concerned that Josh and Judy appear to have switched back into their own bodies a little early in the plot, especially if this story is expected to run to 10 chapters as forecast.
I do hope that there will be further 'out of body' experiences for Josh and Judy.