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by Bigleggednell

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Not enough of anything, no character development whatsoever. Bob just watches? Becky doesn't anticipate any desire for Bob to maybe plug her from behind while she's eating pussy?

BigleggednellBigleggednell12 months agoAuthor

Maybe that will be for Chapter 2. My first story. I’m learning. Thanks for taking the time to add input.

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