All Comments on 'Taken for a Spin Ch. 03'

Too much techno babble

Curious to see where you will take us with this. I could agree that the techical aspect became a little much at the end of the chapter but hey, now its out of the way :)

I agree with other comments too much tech stuff

Then you are reading the wrong story.

please continue this story have Laura write down all the girls names and what degrees they have and get them for him as employees and other things and maybe start a company to earn money to move to a BIGGER house to keep them as employees and maybe other things and have them be loyal to him and to not say anything unless told to by him thru his two girls

On a another site I kept the instructions section to another “optional” chapter. That wasn’t a great option here on literotica. This site does not organize chapters quite as cleanly as other sites.

Thanks for the feedback though:)

The next chapters will be much less technical.

Really good story. I can see you're setting the stage or something much bigger. Can't wait to see where this goes.