Taking The Class Pt. 04

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A wide grin immediately formed on Alaina's face and her eyes opened. She moved her arms around the taller girl's torso and squeezed. "'Morning, Laura," she whispered. That was an awesome dream. The ice cream tasted so good! Even her mint chocolate chip was better than anything I've had before.

"That was really fun," Laura said, returning the hug. "I hope I don't have to do it too often, though. It was kind of scary at first."

Alaina frowned, then drew back to give Laura a confused look in the dim morning light. "What was?"

"You're like me, aren't you." Laura said, her forehead wrinkled in concern. "You have a Quirk that messes with your emotions. I felt it."

Alaina's eyes widened.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Scary universe. People with mind bending skills. Great story though. Definitely would like more. Read this when it first showed up, then had to find it to read again. Fun. Thanks. Definitely want another.

NeoMarauderNeoMarauderabout 2 years ago

I've been fucking obsessed with reading this story and I'm sad that I've hit the point where I'm as desperate as Prez with the teasing waiting for more.

I love FortySixtyZeros's content and I can see how you got inspired, I love this as much as I do Animecon.

I hope you've got more on the way, but if not it's been a fucking delight reading these.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful storytelling. So sad it finished there. Hope to see more from you again. Think this is my favourite story in years and not just erotica.

uabjfuabjfover 2 years ago

I haven't been this sad at finding there is no continuation chapter in a story I think in my entire life. Please please please give us another chapter in the story! I have to know what happens to Alaina and Laura and Will!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was absolutely amazing! I love the characters and how you make them each feel unique. I can't wait for the next part!

GoMikeyGoMikeyalmost 3 years ago

ok I'm at a total lost.....that was a ride on a tsunami I LOVED every word! PLEASE say there is more coming very soon ?!?!?!?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome

I loved the dream sequence. It was amazing that she used her empathy to give her savior exactly what she wanted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Could happen to anyone

Alaina frowns. "Mom, exactly *how* did dad die?"

Mom squirms a bit and sighs. "Well, I was feeling a bit peckish after sex, and in a moment of forgetfulness I ate the first thing in front of me."

SailingdogSailingdogover 3 years ago
Whow

Kind of Hard to figure out where it is going. 🙂

KingIsseiKingIsseiover 3 years ago

Hands down one of the best pieces I have ever read. The character development, plot, and build up are all done brilliantly. I feel like I've committed a crime by reading this for free. I haven't ever left a comment before, but this was just too great of an experience. 10/10 please keep up the good work.

Ouroboros12Ouroboros12almost 4 years ago
great story

Loved the story. any date on when part 5 will come out? Based on how many pages pt 4 had compared to the previous parts is part 5 gonna have 90 pages or something?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

I really liked all of your stories, and can't wait for the next one! You really should be a author at this rate your very good at it. I both liked and disliked the little dream thing at the end because it was cool but I didn't know what was real and what was fake, even though that was the whole point. Love this story and want you to keep on writing it!! Thank you so much for it, has made me laugh a ton and also cry a lot as well, I felt parts of myself in a lot of the characters and your view on the mental issues and emotions are very well done and realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too much

The story is somewhat compelling, and aspects of it are clever, but it goes on and on and on as if you the writer were as manic as Laura when you wrote it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Thank you

I absolutely love this story. Thank you for the chapter, and keep up the great work.

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