All Comments on 'Tales from the Natural Order Pt. 11'

"Do I have a 'cuckosexual' sexuality?"

No you are straight gay as it get.

Thank for a thought provoking chapter. Because of my lack of understanding of the cuckold role, I found the long description of David's interactions with Clare and Marcus tedious. I continue finding David's far too easy "submission" difficult to image. I would have preferred reading discussion(s) between David and Susan in which Susan defines her expectations of David (the man she professes to love) in a cuckold relationship and does the final sentence suggest a possible conflict in their marriage? Should be interesting!

Susan and Raoul falling in true love is sexy as fuck. Not just sex, but love. As they should be.

The intimacy and romance between Raoul and Susan will hopefully continue growing.

You continue to do a good job describing the submissive "cuckosexual" acts that David performs as part of his training. What this and a couple previous chapters are missing is tension. Because he succumbs so willingly to what is happening, your story can only be a set of actions. The surrender has already happened. I feel like cuckold stories are hotter when they contain a good amount of self doubt, inner conflict, and reluctance. Perhaps as lv2travel2 suggests, the final sentence may allow an opportunity.

How the hell have I missed this story?!!

My one-word review: Damn!

Most tiring and boring stories I've ever read. What a piece of junk.

Very well written. The dynamics between both couples and the background setting makes it an addictive story. Am sure there will be chapters when all 4 are together as well as well as teh lifestyle when they return home.

But please don’t keep us waiting so long. One has to go back to the previous chapter to refresh. Hope you can post every fortnight. Pls keep going.

This story is amazing. My goodness.