All Comments on 'Tarton Ch. 10'

by SylviaG

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 2 years ago

Fabulous ending; I didn't see it coming! Dr. Trent is like an octopus, and she's got her tentacles everywhere in poor June's family. Her real goal, however, I think, is Auntie Sylvia, the lovable tramp, who we all love and admire. I also really enjoyed the scene with Cynthia being saved by the barmaid. I forget: Is she related to June somehow, or just another girl from the high school, perhaps now a graduate of same? Anyway, the story is great, and -- as always -- I'm eager to read the next chapter! 5* ~~ JB

kennyboy82kennyboy82about 2 years ago

Brilliant story, lots of horny characters all fucking one another. Cynthia's about to become a 'working girl' it seems, and how long before Toby fucks the life out of June? I loved the surprise ending, there's another whole chapter just in that! As always it's a 5 Star rating and I've put it in my favourites too.

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